tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6653661529565335527.post6344478390606008695..comments2023-12-29T21:03:17.119-08:00Comments on Shaping Words: Syllabic Haiku Day 2012Jim714http://www.blogger.com/profile/06135451195351824085noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6653661529565335527.post-33335371618247608672012-09-05T07:45:01.553-07:002012-09-05T07:45:01.553-07:00Thanks for the response. Maybe 2 more syllables i...Thanks for the response. Maybe 2 more syllables in L2? Maybe something like:<br /><br />syllabic mythos<br />cakes, burning candles and words<br />summer haijin nut<br /><br />I like the way burning might modify both candles and words.<br /><br />Or maybe:<br /><br />syllabic mythos<br />cakes, candles and chosen words<br />summer haijin nut<br /><br />Just tinkering. <br /><br />Thanks,<br /><br />JimJim714https://www.blogger.com/profile/06135451195351824085noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6653661529565335527.post-4981014310515345402012-09-04T11:26:04.825-07:002012-09-04T11:26:04.825-07:00syllabic mythos
cakes, candles and words
summer ha...syllabic mythos<br />cakes, candles and words<br />summer haijin nutAnonymousnoreply@blogger.com