tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6653661529565335527.post6538601340284444243..comments2023-12-29T21:03:17.119-08:00Comments on Shaping Words: OriginsJim714http://www.blogger.com/profile/06135451195351824085noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6653661529565335527.post-71167844663265217282010-04-11T19:27:05.035-07:002010-04-11T19:27:05.035-07:00I really love your Renga. Some elements really shi...I really love your Renga. Some elements really shine, really stand out and leave me gawking, like these lines:<br /><br />A falcon hovers<br />Someone closes a window<br />Two cats sleep soundly<br /><br />Wow.Dan Gurneyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11628603380292404658noreply@blogger.com