Monday, February 22, 2010

Day and Night

Waves
Ripples
On the pond
In the sunlight
Deer

Waves
Ripples
On the pond
In the moonlight
Owls
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2 comments:

  1. Dan GurneyFebruary 22, 2010 at 6:21 PM

    I read both poems this morning and they came to mind several times during the day. They're lovely. Have you posted about the Lanterne form?

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  2. Jim714February 23, 2010 at 5:48 AM

    Dear Dan:

    I'm glad you enjoyed these short verses. I'm going to post something about the Lanterne. It's the shortest syllabic form that I know of; just eleven syllables.

    More later,

    Jim

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