Exploring English Syllabic Verse
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YesI canIf I tryYou taught me thatI want to be the me you see in memy first tetractys
Good Friends:I don't read Chinese, but I appreciate your comments. I have a friend who does read Chinese so I will ask her for a translation.Baseballpoetess:Great job! Each line is clear. I really like line 1; I'd never thought of starting with something like "yes" or "no", with those kinds of words.It's great to know that this little corner of cyberspace has lead to more poetry being written.Best wishes,Jim
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ReplyDeleteYes
ReplyDeleteI can
If I try
You taught me that
I want to be the me you see in me
my first tetractys
Good Friends:
ReplyDeleteI don't read Chinese, but I appreciate your comments. I have a friend who does read Chinese so I will ask her for a translation.
Baseballpoetess:
Great job! Each line is clear. I really like line 1; I'd never thought of starting with something like "yes" or "no", with those kinds of words.
It's great to know that this little corner of cyberspace has lead to more poetry being written.
Best wishes,
Jim