Friday, January 6, 2012

Winter Weekend

Blue sky
Cold day
Strong wind
Kids play

2 comments:

  1. I love rhythmic singing of the names of things, the poet's single most important task.

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  2. Thanks Brian. This kind of poem reminds me of kids on a playground who will sometimes talk in a kind of simple rhythm. English has a large percentage of one syllable words which allows for this kind of steady beat.

    Jim

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