Wednesday, August 1, 2012

No Exit

At the prison
For the criminally insane
They wanted to know
About karma and rebirth.
Better luck next time, I guess.

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2 comments:

  1. BrianAugust 1, 2012 at 2:17 PM

    The sardonic voice brings home the weightiness of the subject.

    From a craft angle, it's interesting how you break the form but keep the syllabic count. It works. The rhythms and line-breaks seem inevitable.

    Nicely done.

    Brian

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  2. Jim714August 2, 2012 at 7:04 AM

    Thanks for the comments, Brian.

    Best wishes,

    Jim

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