Wednesday, September 19, 2012

Septemberscape

Six blackbirds watching
As I take my morning walk --
The shifting dirt road


2 comments:

  1. I would really like that last line to be 'a shifting shadow'... :)

    And I wish there was no word verification to plague my eyesight with its blurry numbers - be kind to us oldies eh, and give it the boot?! :)

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  2. Friend Jinsky:

    That's a great suggestion; I like it. It gives the Haiku more of an early dawn feel.

    Thanks,

    Jim

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