Thursday, August 15, 2013

Landscape

Summer
Warm
August days
The morning haze,
Drifting in from the sea, stays
Until about eight or nine when the sun's rays
Evaporate the last traces of cool creating distinct pools of shade
Cast by scattered old oak trees in my neighbor's dry field while in the sky a few swift-moving clouds are in beauty arrayed

2 comments:

Jinksy said...

Thinks - Might want to edit out the 's' on 'evaporate(s)' ?

Jim714 said...

Thanks, Jinsky. Nice proofreading. It is appreciated. Correction accomplished!

Jim