Thursday, January 28, 2010

Apparition

I'd swear
I saw you there
Sitting at the table
But it was just a daydream that
Took form

2 comments:

  1. I love the cinquain form. This one's a gem. Nice to see you today.

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  2. Thanks, Dan. I find the Cinquain a challenge. It's the last, two-syllable, line. I think of it as like a cadence in music; like the last two chords of a symphony. If the last line is off, the whole Cinquain is thrown. But a good Cinquain is a real jewel.

    Likewise, it was auspicious seeing you.

    Best,

    Jim

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