Shaping Words: A Different Voice

Sunday, March 28, 2010

I think it was God
Speaking to me this morning --
The sound of the wind
Pulsating through the branches
Of the stand of ancient oaks

Dan Gurney said...: Wonderful, wonderful. This Tanka pairs nicely with the Cinquain, "Trees Speak" I wrote yesterday. Synchronicity, I guess. Have a good day with the Apple Seed sangha.; March 28, 2010 at 8:35 AM
Jim714 said...: Good Friends:

Thanks for your kind comments. They are appreciated.

Dan, I visited your blog and enjoyed the Trees Speak Cinquain; especially the elegant use of rhyme.

Thanks,

Jim; March 29, 2010 at 7:43 AM