Sunday, March 28, 2010

A Different Voice

I think it was God
Speaking to me this morning --
The sound of the wind
Pulsating through the branches
Of the stand of ancient oaks
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2 comments:

  1. Dan GurneyMarch 28, 2010 at 8:35 AM

    Wonderful, wonderful. This Tanka pairs nicely with the Cinquain, "Trees Speak" I wrote yesterday. Synchronicity, I guess. Have a good day with the Apple Seed sangha.

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  2. Jim714March 29, 2010 at 7:43 AM

    Good Friends:

    Thanks for your kind comments. They are appreciated.

    Dan, I visited your blog and enjoyed the Trees Speak Cinquain; especially the elegant use of rhyme.

    Thanks,

    Jim

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