Shaping Words: Within

Sunday, December 27, 2009

Within

I can feel the light
On Sunday morning
When Friends are gathered
It is transforming

Revision 1:

I can feel the light
On First Day morning
When Friends are gathered
It is transforming

2 comments:

Dan Gurney said...: The Appleseed Meeting?; December 27, 2009 at 8:06 PM
Jim714 said...: Hi Dan:

Yes, Apple Seed Meeting. I get my weekly dose of silence and stillness there.

Best,

Jim; December 28, 2009 at 1:12 PM

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Welcome to Shaping Words

My name is Jim Wilson and I am your host. Shaping Words is dedicated to the exploration of formal syllabic verse in English. Formal syllabic verse is poetry that has a set form which is determined by counting the syllables of the lines of the specific form. In formal syllabic verse words are shaped to the specific form of the type of verse being written. Hence the title of this blog: Shaping Words.

Formal syllabic verse has a wide variety of forms including Cinquain, Tetractys, Lanterne, as well as imported forms such as Haiku, Renga, and Tanka when the poet follows their traditional syllabic structure. This blog will offer poems from these many forms as well as occasional posts on the place of syllabic verse in English.

Above all Shaping Words hopes to be an enjoyable place for people to visit. Thank you for visiting Shaping Words and I look forward to hearing from you.