Thursday, January 28, 2010

Apparition

I'd swear
I saw you there
Sitting at the table
But it was just a daydream that
Took form

2 comments:

Dan Gurney said...

I love the cinquain form. This one's a gem. Nice to see you today.

Jim714 said...

Thanks, Dan. I find the Cinquain a challenge. It's the last, two-syllable, line. I think of it as like a cadence in music; like the last two chords of a symphony. If the last line is off, the whole Cinquain is thrown. But a good Cinquain is a real jewel.

Likewise, it was auspicious seeing you.

Best,

Jim