Monday, February 22, 2010

Day and Night

Waves
Ripples
On the pond
In the sunlight
Deer

Waves
Ripples
On the pond
In the moonlight
Owls

2 comments:

Dan Gurney said...

I read both poems this morning and they came to mind several times during the day. They're lovely. Have you posted about the Lanterne form?

Jim714 said...

Dear Dan:

I'm glad you enjoyed these short verses. I'm going to post something about the Lanterne. It's the shortest syllabic form that I know of; just eleven syllables.

More later,

Jim