Wednesday, April 7, 2010

When They Were Young

Kites
Colors
In the sky
Children's laughter
I can remember many years after

3 comments:

楊偉誠 said...
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baseballpoetess.com said...

Yes
I can
If I try
You taught me that
I want to be the me you see in me


my first tetractys

Jim714 said...

Good Friends:

I don't read Chinese, but I appreciate your comments. I have a friend who does read Chinese so I will ask her for a translation.

Baseballpoetess:

Great job! Each line is clear. I really like line 1; I'd never thought of starting with something like "yes" or "no", with those kinds of words.

It's great to know that this little corner of cyberspace has lead to more poetry being written.

Best wishes,

Jim