Exploring English Syllabic Verse
I would really like that last line to be 'a shifting shadow'... :)And I wish there was no word verification to plague my eyesight with its blurry numbers - be kind to us oldies eh, and give it the boot?! :)
Friend Jinsky:That's a great suggestion; I like it. It gives the Haiku more of an early dawn feel.Thanks,Jim
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I would really like that last line to be 'a shifting shadow'... :)
And I wish there was no word verification to plague my eyesight with its blurry numbers - be kind to us oldies eh, and give it the boot?! :)
Friend Jinsky:
That's a great suggestion; I like it. It gives the Haiku more of an early dawn feel.
Thanks,
Jim
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