Exploring English Syllabic Verse
The sardonic voice brings home the weightiness of the subject. From a craft angle, it's interesting how you break the form but keep the syllabic count. It works. The rhythms and line-breaks seem inevitable. Nicely done.Brian
Thanks for the comments, Brian. Best wishes,Jim
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The sardonic voice brings home the weightiness of the subject.
From a craft angle, it's interesting how you break the form but keep the syllabic count. It works. The rhythms and line-breaks seem inevitable.
Nicely done.
Brian
Thanks for the comments, Brian.
Best wishes,
Jim
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